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Monday Poem_____________ [" Nature Calling"]
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Aug 02, 2010 9:54 am
Monday Poem_____________ [" Nature Calling"]
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Manohar Bhatia
_______ ["Nature Calling"]_________
[Overflowing clouds with multitude of clouds
floating endlessly against ther blue
with gentle wind,cooling our noses,cheeks,eyes.
Colorful flowers like a rainbow
dot the landscape of happy earth
inviting the visitors for merging,melting.

Wet grass caused by morning dew
brings thrill to your delicate feet
as these take a long walk on green.

Singing leaves,aided by droplets of rain falling & filtering from above
creating soft music to your ears.

Dancing fountains are a delightto watch from a distance fitted
with dazzling lights of colored bulbs.

Nodding trees are talking to you
like your long lost friend and
waiting for your re-connect.

Contended smiles with friendly handshakes
are meeting in joyful gardens of laughter clubs
for peace, solitude, happiness or otherworldlyness!

Yes man, go, go go
Nature is calling!]

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Aug 02, 2010 10:07 am
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Manohar Bhatia
Hi,Correction to my first line in Stanza I.....
Overflowing skies with multitude of clouds......
sorry for typo error.
Manohar Bhatia.
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Aug 02, 2010 12:49 pm
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Jack Huber
I like your theme and especially this stanza:
Nodding trees are talking to you
like your long lost friend and
waiting for your re-connect.
Very well done.
Jack.
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Aug 03, 2010 1:45 am
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Khurshid Alam
Soon you'll find me in the woods and medows inspired by you.
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Aug 03, 2010 2:24 am
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Maya Mahant
I ditto Khurshid's sentiments.
Maya
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Aug 03, 2010 10:33 am
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Diane Tegarden
Manohar,I haven't been getting my notices on posts here, sorry I hadn't checked in sooner!
Your poem is a breath of fresh air, reminding us to enjoy the beauty of nature.
Energetically, Diane Tegarden"Getting OUT of Limbo-A Self Help Divorce Book for Women";"Light ThroughShuttered Window- A Compendium of my Poetry";"Anti-Vigilante and TheRips in Time"- available at www.firewalkerpublications.com and www.Amazon.com
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Aug 05, 2010 10:47 pm
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Diane Stephenson
Manohar:I just got the notification of your post. You have written on a subject that draws me. I love to be out in nature though I don't get the chance nearly as often as I could wish. I especially like the lines:
"Singing leaves,aided by dropletsof rain falling & filtering from above
creating soft music to your ears."
If it wasn't already time for bed I might just try to find some excuse to go out into the country and take some more pictures. Actually in my city (population over 375,000)we have many "wilderness" areas, parks and conservation areas that make it the next-best thing to living in the country. It's known as the Forest City, so you have a little idea of what it's like here.
Diane. S.